Wednesday, January 18, 2006

Hot Titular Action

Here is a list of first lines that I did not use in my book.

He hadn't had an outbreak in almost two years, and was considering dating again.

There are things about this world.

Oh shit!

His father, a minister, would never have welcomed this sort in his house.

Your overeating can be controlled.

It sucked so bad to be a thirty year old girl who had just broken up with her idiot boyfriend, and is nervouse about winning the big case, that I just
had to go shopping.

God just looking at it hurts.

From the moment he first laid eyes on her he knew he would definitely, definitely holler back.

And their parents said they'd never get
anywhere playing these video games.

I was a teenage non-partisan voter.

It doesn't end here.

It wasn't that my father never touched me, it was that he would never touch me where I explicitly told him to.

It didn't seem like a liability on paper.

Everything I know I learned from that colored fella.

It was the best of times, I mean, really, just awesome.

He surmised from the heavy taste of iron that in a couple of days she would become moody and confrontational.

Tune in next time when I give a list of last lines cut from my book. Here's a preview:


Hot dog, indeed; hot dog, indeed.



3 Comments:

Blogger 11:11 said...

"He surmised from the heavy taste of iron that in a couple of days she would become moody and confrontational"

That's my favorite one. It could be taken so many ways.

January 20, 2006 6:08 PM  
Blogger pacoblue said...

that one was for the ladies.

January 20, 2006 7:13 PM  
Blogger 11:11 said...

No one ever said you weren't a ladies man.

January 23, 2006 9:10 PM  

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